
Tuesday is pretty much a lost day for me. I leave the house at 9:00 AM and get back around 9:20 PM, with four hours of bridge and 2.5 hours of tae kwon do (as well as an hour or so of driving, and some setup (dressing) for my classes. This leaves me something like 2.5 hours of work time and I head to the Richardson (TX) public library with my Jornada to write. Sometime between when I left my bridge teaching and when I headed out for Tae Kwon Do, I realized I'd given away too much in the previous scene and had missed out on a wonderful opportunity to have Sophia discover that the coffins were made of uranium. So, I started hacking away. I didn't actually get to the point I was writing new pages, and I have no idea how many pages I added (if any) but I truly believe this will make the story stronger. I'm right around the halfway point, so it's certainly time for a major plot point and I'm working on that--but I'd missed some of the suspense angle.
The first rule of writing is not to make things to easy on your characters. The second is probably not to make things to easy on yourself. If something seems obvious, it just might be a cliche.
Last night I managed to get my video software installed on the laptop. Perhaps tomorrow I'll actually get to the first (of many?) video review. I gave up on QUEEN OF WOLVES. It's not that it was bad, it just didn't grab me. Now I'm reading THE REINCARNATIONIST by M. J. Rose.
I'm going to make DALLAS VICE by Amy Eastlake the www.BooksForABuck.com book of the day. A Texas Ranger is investigating police corruption in Dallas (always a good idea) and his lead suspect is a sexy vice sergeant. But the more he investigates, the more his libido wants to change her from suspect to lover. This is definitely no way to run an investigation. Or is it? This one is on sale for only $1 so grab it quick. (I really am going to raise it to $3.99). Learn more, read the excerpt, or buy the entire eNovel here: www.booksforabuck.com/rompages/rom_2004/dallas_vice.html. Available in Adobe PDF, HTML, Palm Reader and zipped Microsoft Reader formats. Here's the cover (cover design by Karen Leabo):

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